What I Love

I just posted another response to Ann Linquist’s blog. I wanted to share what I wrote here. I am not normally all that sentimental or squishy-hearted. But, the prompt brought out a little different side of my normal writing. Below you will find it. I hope you like it.

Paper and Flower


I loved my bicycle. There was nothing greater than the wind roaring in my ears as I raced my friends down a hill.
I loved my books. Worlds without end, facts, myths, and new meanings gave me new intellect and expanded my understanding.
I loved my music. The harmony of life cannot exist without music.
I loved my girlfriend. The first heartbreak hardens you in the softest of places.
I loved my car. The oil, grease, and bruised knuckles gave me pride of ownership.
I loved my job. The value of a dollar measured with my own sweat.
I loved my family. What matters less is everything else.
I LOVE LIFE.

Panic in the Classroom

“You have attended Creative Writing 101 for a few months now.” Professor DiMarco paced in front of the whiteboard. “Today, I want you to give me three things in this room, that no one else would have noticed. You have five minutes.” She turned the egg-timer to five minutes and sat down behind her desk.

Walter sat at the front of the class everyday. It wasn’t because he wanted any particular attention from the instructor. His vision had never been all that great, even as a child. Now, a non-traditional student, past the age of forty, early onset of presbyopia complicates his already extreme myopic vision. In so many words, he rarely saw anything clear in the room. His classmates will, no doubt, point out many things he hasn’t seen in the room beyond the short path from the door to his desk.

Walter eagerly thought of each detail that he could bring to light. Nothing he thought of seemed to him to fall into the category of a detail no-one-else-would-have-noticed. His mind soon wandered. He started thinking of his classmates. Ella generally sat near the front as well. She would often talk with Walter after class. She always wore the same perfume, Estée Lauder, Beautiful. It took Walter some time to find the perfume at the department store. He sniffed each bottle, one at a time, until he found the ‘Ella-smell.’

Michael interrupted his thoughts when he started tapping his pencil against the desk. This was something Michael did anytime the room became even remotely quite. Walter imagined that Michael might even have some clinical avoidance of silence. Tapping his pencil, bouncing his leg against the edge of the desk, or masticating with glee. It seemed to Walter that Michael never quieted.

The floor made the soft premonitory vibration just before the AC started blowing into the room. Walter slipped his jacket on from where he had hung it on the back of his desk-chair. He always brought it to class. The room, or the entire school, seemed to be hinged on freezing the knowledge into their students.

The instructor walked up to the whiteboard, eraser in one hand and a capped, black, dry-erase marker in the other. She turned to the class, mistaking Walter’s hand raised in the air while putting on his jacket and called upon him, “What do you have for us, Walter?”

Panic rippled through his entire body. Beads of sweat, despite the cold air blowing into the room, perched on his upper lip and brow. “Uh,” he started. The room shrank. The path to the door seemed to ring out to him. He let out the breath he held. “The tile on the floor is white?”

The water is fine…

Red Hare Long Day Lager
Me and my beer.

I am sitting at my desk finishing off my beer. A local brand, Red Hare Brewing Company, here in Marietta, Georgia. Long Day Lager – Perfect for the situation. I am selling my house, doing this writing thing, making sure the children get to school (and back), and trying to find myself in social media. Hell, I am not even sure I know what that really means.

I have been working on this whole social media thingy-do the last few months. Quite frankly, I understand only minor portions of it. At the present time, 11:54PM EDT October 9, I have 172 followers and I am following 330 Twitter accounts. I haven’t tried to touch anything else really.

There are a lot of interesting people out there. I have been focusing on the writing crowd. Those are the ones I want to understand. What is working for them and what isn’t.

I have been looking at the number of Tweets that folks can put out. Social media is like swimming in a giant pool with a bunch of those shiny little fish. They all look just like you and flit about in the water real fast. The Twitter page will update you on the number of Tweets you missed while you were trying to read some of the ones displayed in your timeline. I timed it once. In less than 10 minutes I missed reading over 200 Tweets. Like anybody can read that fast or would they really want to. Some of the tweets are just downright silly.

“Hey, I just stepped out on the porch. It’s raining!”

“Did you know if you flush the toilet, the water just whooshes right out of there.”

“Hey! Read my book. It is just fantastic! Somebody else thinks so too!”

Then you have the guy who thinks that he can only have friends if he ReTweets, I don’t know, a thousand Tweets in a day. If a real person can spend that much time performing the thumb or wrist gymnastics to get it done, when do they write their own fiction? Thank goodness for the Mute function.

I suppose that Tweeting is like blogging. You get out of it what you put in. I do like the interaction with my “peers.” I don’t know that I have any ability to keep up with what hardly any of them are saying. It is still fun to have a lookie-lou every now and again and see what everyone is going on about.

I think that the Twitter timeline reminds me of the scene in Poltergeist where Carol Anne is staring at the television. Noise. If you stare at it long enough, though, stuff just starts popping out at ya.

Keep writing.

The Lost Well

Recently, I responded to a writing prompt, , by Ann Linquist. I think that I will be expanding and reworking this story. Leave a comment on Ann’s site or here if you like it as well.

I will post the reworked story on this blog later in the month. Keep writing.